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Cool.

Beautifly mastered, but a little too repetitive.

TheMayo responds:

yea, i kno...sorry

LOL very fun

I can just imagen it, "Attack of the killer toys!" from this song. so much fun imagening toys marching away from a factory by the hundred.

I is a tiny, tiny bit repetive, but that's ok. Beautifily mastered.

TheMayo responds:

aha
Thnx
If You Liked This One you MIGHT Enjoy the Follow Up
The Inventor

but tht ones a bit more repetitive
=P

Cool

A few improvments that could be made: shorten the intro, make the bass a tad quieter, as it is overpowering everything. work on the smoothness of the accelerando. a little repetitive at times, but certen parts are worth it.

customstuff responds:

Thanks, the bass was supposed to be loud though. It's actually not that loud if you think about it, it just has flanger and blood overdrive in it. Thanks for your opinion though!

.....

I can't describe this with words.

You took the orignal, took the shape of it, made a new mold, melted down the pure emotion for it, and poured it in, creating this.

I acually described it with words... I didn't know I counld do that.
You are awsome.

Cool.

great to have on whilst daydreaming... ah, the possibities.
The lead synth is either "plucked!" or "Sytrus", right?
nice ambient song. You have managed to capture the essence of the song, which is difficult to do, especially with vocals.

RB6ELITE responds:

it is actually a mix of 3 different synths, one is sytrus, one is z3ta, one is vanguard

nicly done

wow, it even loops...
Not perticlarly my favorite style of music, as this should be under "Bass and Drums", not "Techno".
Still, very nice job with the mastering of everything to prevent overloading.
This would, quite obviously, go very well in a lot of fl- THIS IS GOING TO DRIVE ME CRAZY- sorry, looped for about the fith time. But as I was saying, this would go very well in a lot of flash movies, or cinimatics in a game. For heavens sake don't put it as the main song. (shudder)
Anyway, you did a good job
(you get one point off for two reasons- one, you misclassified the song, and two, it has gotten annoying while writing this review. (so don't take it the wrong way, but I got sick of this very fast))

wow...

Top points:

You have a very powerful singing voice
the key change at 1:36 was very interesting
very good rerecording at 2:19 to 2:30

Only sugestion is to raise the volume of the cellonviola (cello) at times where it is very weak.

On the subject of covers, as long as you use no copyrighted material, such as audio clips, and do not sell the cover, you are within your legal limits.

interesting contrast

The contrast between the color of the synths and the chord progression pattern creates an interesting contrast which makes this useful in a varity of situations. However, you probably should change your chord progression sometime in the middle for a better listening song, instead of a soundtrack one.

Shinrog responds:

I do that nowadays,this 1 is one of the oldest songs I've made while practicing..

very nice

This a very nice piece.
You may want to try creating more rythems and transitions to expand the length of the song, or something similar.

quick fix

nice, but a little short.
A way to fix the silence at the end would be to open the mp3 in a audio editing program, such as audacity, and remove the silence. Not perfect, but it works.

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