zipybug14's Reviews

[Retratos Christmas]

Maybe...

you could attach the slideshow to clicking and increase the automatic delay.
Funny, but hard to follow.

Retrato responds:

Yeah I know, im learning how too do that but remember this was an old flash ^^'
Thanks for thr review :D

[First Madness Movie YEY!!]

I see ...

You doing very well at this in the future. Keep up the work on it and improve the details stated below. Other than that this is great.

[Mr.Blue Sky Soda]

Cute

I like it. You could improve a couple of points. It would probably help if you were to watch some of the motions used, like the leg swinging and try to replicate it. Another problem I saw was that the little text was too small to read with the font used. Hope this helps.

[Mechanism]

Level 3 (blue path) is MISSING from walkthrough

I cannot finish the game.
This is a problem.

[Armored Corps]

OOOOOkay

This game has many programming flaws (yes, I am addressing you fwe).
The art is very nice.

First off, the score in-game is the countdown for the shields, which can be circumvented if the shields are allowed to count down all the way, and reactivating shields at 43. I also kept getting tread and shield power ups when I still had about 5 cannons to get. Power-ups should not come when there is no real power-up.

I am running google chrome 2.0.172.43
Flash 10,0,32,18

[You Only Live Once]

I found out how to restart

Very funny.
I will not post how to reset just the save file for this flash here, for sake of making it a little harder to cheat. If you want to know how, please PM me.

The graphics were a little crude, but that fits well as part of the flash's looks. Handdrawn (even with a mouse) looks better than a lot of basic shapes.

[Walk Away (Short Mix) [RNG]]

good. Great potential

This is only missing a couple of things, I think that it could use more length/themes.
I think that the ending is far too long, you should not have a single simple drum rhythm going for as long as you do at the end. You could try fading the drums out at the end, after you fade the rest of the song.
You are a great artist.

[Do not fear death]

Nice

Good song. It could use more variety in it.
It loops well.

[Catcorn]

So much for 13 being unlucky

I am voter 13, raised score by .082

Anyway, this is awesome. I love this kind of stuff, where you use a sample and make a tune with it. This could use a better ending, though. It seems a bit abrupt. Some joke it turned out to be. Something to keep in mind is to take pride in your work, but don't be an a-hole about it. Take it or leave it. Your call. :)